I have been working on a 1920s mixed horror and mafia game using a campaign by the same name. The game is playable now, but there is still one scene missing (a murder in your second cleaner time) that I am still writing. I have some feedback on typos and such that is not yet realized in the game; further feedback is welcome as long as it is a) helpful and b) polite or friendly.

The player takes the role of a young woman who is about to enter a new world of shadows and find her place therein: as a whore, a thug or a ...specialist. :roll:

This is to be the first of four parts: the second is planned for a 50s setting, the third is Disco! and the last is...now.
You will make decissions that will immediatiely or in the long run influence the stroy: some do not have consequences within this part but in the later parts.